Announcements17 Mar 2008 09:24 pm

This is my first foray during The Challenge into the jazz world, and I’m excited about all the possibilities this song will have for instrumentation eventually. There’s lots of big, wide empty spaces for soloing and noodling… guitar, vibes, muted trumpet, marimba, fretless bass, keys of some sort, whatever…. I’m definitely not the right singer for this tune, but can see a female vox with a smooth tone working splendidly. How about you, Coby? Or Corry? Or Glenda?

By the way, Week 9’s missing lyrics still haven’t been slotted in. Is nobody going to step forward with some incredibly poignant, perfect lyrics to fill the void? I can’t even listen to that song as it is, with that goofball muttering his way through those lines. If you need to rewrite the first two lines of that section as well, have at ‘er!



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A stolen smile, 
From across the room,
A passing touch that’s over way too soon,
She don’t know,
Far as I can tell,
And if she does she learned to hide it well,

Turn away now,
Say goodbye,
This is dangerous,
Between you and I,

I can’t live this secret life,
Lead our lovers to the,
Edge of a knife

Are we strangers wasting time?
Or cold-hearted killers about to cross the line?

Midnight comes,
You’re at the door,
Moving silently like a shadow on the floor, 
But in that dress,
I can only see,
The ghost of her still staring back at me,

Walk away now,
Say goodnight,
It’s too dangerous,
Between you and I,

Can’t live this secret life,
You’re not supposed to care,
I’m not supposed to mind,

Are we strangers, wasting time?
Or cold-hearted killers about to cross the line?

One Response to “Week 11 - Cold-Hearted Killers”

  1. on 19 Mar 2008 at 8:59 pm Migs

    I like it El! The underlying rhythm has a kind of ‘Mission Impossible’ crossed with ‘Alfred Hitchcock presents’ feel to it that fits really well with the lyrics. It’s that creepy “Is something bad about to happen?” kind of melody. I agree with you…perhaps a sultry female voice to sing it.

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