Week 29 - Comments
Hi Elliot,
This one’s pretty nice. I kinda wish there was a bridge though, to be honest. It feels like it needed a change of pace somewhere.
Good luck with the fund raiser next month!
R.
I liked it - mostly. It seemed to need a kick in the pants part way through. As usual, great work under pressure. No doubt.
G.
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Hi Elliot,
This one’s pretty nice. I kinda wish there was a bridge though, to be honest. It feels like it needed a change of pace somewhere.
Good luck with the fund raiser next month!
R.
I liked it - mostly. It seemed to need a kick in the pants part way through. As usual, great work under pressure. No doubt.
G.